修改后:
The saying of "Marriage is the tomb of love" is reflected in another aspect that most of people think love is the precondition of marriage
大致正确,除了个别小地方有问题:
tomb不是tombe
most of people think 很多人后动词不加s、people前不加the,不是特指
应为be reflected in固定搭配?表示显示,反映(某种现象。观念等)。或者就只用reflects表示反反映也行!